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shnozzola



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I have presented my case calmly. I have explained to you why your personal greed, your lifestyle, is hurting us on a global scale (although it particularly hurts some people, it also hurts all of us), but you people aren't listening. You just act as if the world stops at your nose.

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I have presented my case calmly. I have explained why our personal greed, our lifestyle, is hurting us on a global scale (although it particularly hurts some people, it also hurts all of us), but we all need to listen. We all just act as if the world stops at our noses.

 and we will understand your position easier.   ;)
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Azdgari Very appropriate. May 03, 2013, 07:50:16 PM